October 18, 2020 – Rainbow Reviewss

by Gary Cocksy

Publication Date: May 9th, 2020

This is a story about a young guy and an experienced dominant man. The two meet in a bathhouse. The man is called Big Jack because of his big penis. The story is narrated from the boy’s perspective and the reader gets to see the psychological changes in his behavior and feelings as Jack gradually dominates him. Actually, the domination is not gradual but the main character’s reaction and surrender are.

I can’t remember if the main character had a name. Jack used to call him “boy” so I will refer to him as MC or the boy. The boy was submissive by nature as he needed to be dominated all the time and the chemistry between him and Jack was very intense. He surrendered with no hesitation. He had that need inside him. There was no confusion and he wanted to forget and remove all the responsibilities. He craved to be owned and be the property of a man that he just met in the bathhouse! Now why he clicked with Jack I am not too sure about. Their chemistry was strong but it could also be due to the size of Jack’s cock.

“He smacked me again and asked, ” If you surrender you would belong to me. Do you want to belong to me, boy?” My hard-throbbing cock told me the answer. There was only one answer I could give to a man who had only met me minutes before but who already understood me so well. I was very innocent and knew nothing of the BDSM scene but I knew that my life had changed forever. I nodded yes and began my training as Jack’s boy that first night in the baths.”

The main character was a real slut. He needed cock inside him stuffing his hole like forever. He needed it even if it was without his consent! “I needed to be violated; needed to be stuffed full of cock and cum; needed to be treated like a little slut. I needed to surrender myself totally to be used and abused by a strong powerful man.”. Jack as his master was taking full advantage of all this to satisfy himself sexually. He had his control and grip over the boy and the more he controlled him the more the boy went into heat! Towards the second half of the story, the boy recognizes himself as a cock worshiper. Phallus worship becomes a dominant factor in his narration.

The author’s writing style is intense sexually as that is the main focus of the story. The cover has gay porn star Colby Jansen on it and I think that is for a good reason. I feel the author clearly wanted this story to be for a niche audience. It is a very porny story from start to end. It is filled with graphic and hardcore sexual acts. Obviously, it is not meant for the regular MM romance fans. I can’t imagine any female reader liking this. The piggy and sleazy nature of this story make it only suitable for those gay males who love it to be totally uninhibited and extreme. I’d be really surprised if any female liked this or even gay male readers who read the mainstream MM romance books. I got my copy of this book from Amazon but unfortunately, I cannot see it there anymore. I doubt if it is available on any other website. Maybe this was a one-time thing for the author. As I said these kinds of books are even more niche than the usual indie erotica and that makes marketing them more difficult. But here you have a small review for it. I hope to see and read more of this author’s work soon. My initial rating for the story was 4 stars because towards the end I felt two or three paragraphs should have come before a certain event that happened but another part of me wanted to give it 5 stars because I enjoyed its raunchiness and the major part of it!

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